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“Nakita ko dito yung nawawala mong alaga Luna, kausapin mo nalang kapag nakauwi na sila a day from n

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“DRAFT!”, bungad ni John as I walked pass the campus gate later than the flag ceremony.

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Kanino bang idea mag fieldtrip dito, sa city pa talaga. Napaka init, napaka ingay, ang dami pang tao

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“Draft? Ayus ka lang?”, a simple pat from the back brought my attention to Luna.

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Parang umiikot ang langit at magalaw ang lupa. I was feeling nauseous as I examined my surroundings,

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It was vague pero I guess naramdaman ko pa ang pagdaloy ng kuryente sa katawan ko after I said my go

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