SHANNY'S POV "Hay! Ano ba 'yan, bakit ayaw tumigil ng luha na 'to?" Napatingala ako nang maramdaman an
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Paulin Elcano
the flow of the story is good. in every scene, you can't say that it is cliche because it's not. the story is very unique and, I know for sure, in the next chapters it will be more surprising. xoxo.
the flow of the story is good. in every scene, you can't say that it is cliche because it's not. the story is very unique and, I know for sure, in the next chapters it will be more surprising. xoxo.
15/02/2022
5🙂 nice
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